Talk:The Last Waltz

A really careless piece of writing!

The Last Waltz was The Band's final concert which took place on Thanksgiving (November 26) in 1976 at the Winterland Ballroom in San Francisco, California. It was also made into a movie by Martin Scorsese, that came out in 1978, other than The Band some of the other musicians were: etc etc etc.

• Who or what is is "The Band"? This is an encyclopedia. Don't act as if your reader knows who you are talking about!
• It was also made into a movie by Martin Scorsese, that came out in 1978, other than The Band some of the other musicians were: etc etc etc.

This sentence is absolute nonsense for two reasons.

1. Two sentences have been run together without a fullstop or capital letter.
2. It reads as if the "other musicians" all "came out" in 1978. I don't think so, Darlings! Some of them were "out" already, and others are still in the closet.

• Make it clear whether the "other musicians" were part of the concert. You can't jam another idea, on a date two yyears later in between the two concert bits and expect it to be clear.

Amandajm (talk) 04:29, 5 February 2008 (UTC)