Talk:Amrita Pritam
Latest comment: 9 months ago by Darkfrog24
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Before scoring this article for the F&F contest, I like to run it through a readability checker [1]. It got results of high school through adulthood, and I'd like to see it accessible to middle schoolers (ages 11-13).
But the gizmo is the beginning, not my sandwich-fueled brain. Here we go! I'd like to see less passive voice ("She was known for" begs the question of who knew it) and less poetic language ("She began her journey" vs "she started writing...") Darkfrog24 (talk) 18:43, 14 February 2024 (UTC)