Talk:Ardah
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This article contains a translation of عرضة نجدية from ar.wikipedia. |
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Greetings F&F 2024 contestant @Ayesha46:. Thank you for bringing this translation to SEWP and its readers. I will begin this preliminary analysis by running the article through my readability gizmo. It's giving me hits as low as sixth grade with an average of eighth.
I will now read the article with my mighty organic brain. There is more passive voice than I like to see in a SEWP article. I see words like "nowadays" and other things that don't need to be there. Overall, it's okay.
There is part of the judging that I have been neglecting: WP:Orphan status. The only article linking to this one is Jenadriyah. I don't think the contest set an absolute limit, but I did get the impression that just one was not enough.
Choice of subject: super. Darkfrog24 (talk) 19:52, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
- I think you should allow 1 considering the amount of articles that we have here, thoughts? -- 💌Ayesha46 (talk) 19:55, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
- I've raised it for discussion at the contest talk page. Your thoughts would be welcome there. Darkfrog24 (talk) 20:05, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
- i've linked this to 1 more article (Culture of Saudi Arabia) but I still have article for example Yowlah dance which has only 1 article linking to it; so, Let's see what's decided! -- 💌Ayesha46 (talk) 20:25, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
- I've raised it for discussion at the contest talk page. Your thoughts would be welcome there. Darkfrog24 (talk) 20:05, 23 March 2024 (UTC)