Talk:Automobiles of the 1920s
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Osiris in topic Something has quite clearly gone wrong with this article
"Rubbish suspension"? change
Sounds a bit harsh wouldn't ya;; agree? 72.73.64.172 (talk) 14:07, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
hi
Good Cars for 1920's
Something has quite clearly gone wrong with this article change
I do not possess enough knowledge on the subject to change this article, but it has a ridiculously juvenile and personal tone. It is also a stub, and appears to have been littered with passages from the book of Genesis.
UPDATE: I have edited the article to the best of my ability, attempting to neutralise the tone and remove unnecessary links. It would be good if this article could be expanded slightly.
- Hi! Thanks for spotting this. It was just a bit of vandalism that got missed, unfortunately. I restored the original text as it was before the vandalism, and left your new work in the second paragraph. Feel free to continue editing it, I just didn't want to lose anyone's good work. :) Osiris (talk) 18:07, 17 February 2013 (UTC)
- Hi. I've edited the wording slightly in the first paragraph (e.g. "a lot" to "considerably"), but it needs further edits or a complete re-write in order to sound less like a student.