Talk:Automotive navigation system
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Osiris
This page needs rewriting. --Pyt (talk) 10:19, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- It is a good start, but it is not written in the correct style, eg Car navigation allows you to see where you are as a car driver at any moment. This should be written from an impersonal view without the "you". For example, Car navigation allows the car driver to see where he is at any moment would be much better. There are other examples in the text. I have added a cleanup tag so that other editors may help. --Peterdownunder (talk) 11:21, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- Removed all "personal language" that I saw in the article. Does this article still need copy editing beyond that? Or was that the primary concern? Obobskivich (talk) 09:14, 8 May 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks! I think it was me who added the tag about a year ago, so I removed it after your rewrite. Osiris (talk) 10:33, 8 May 2013 (UTC)
Sodät? change
What does this word mean? I Googled it and it appears to be German. Kansan (talk) 13:21, 1 November 2010 (UTC)