Talk:Future of the Earth
Latest comment: 14 years ago by I-20 in topic PGA Review
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PGA Review
changeHello 1-20, :) I have a few réclamations in the article, although it's written pretty well. It's a fairly long list, but I hope you can get to fixing all of them soon so the article can pass. Here it is:
- Ref 11 seems rather complex. The word obiliquity should be either linked or simplified.
Done —I-20the highway 20:37, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
- Words such as Milankovitch, supergreenhouse should be simplified, linked, or explained in paranthesis.
- Glaciation
Done, Supercontinent cycle, Holocene extinction Done, gravitational perturbations, plate tectonics, tidal acceleration, Earth-Moon distance, length of the day Done, silicate minerals, Peter D. Ward, Donald Brownlee, runaway greenhouse effect, Planetary habitability, Risks to civilization, humans and planet Earth, and Stability of the Solar System all need simplifying or linking. - The main article template leading to Conservation biology should be removed, as it is a red link.
Wow, looking over this, it seems way too much for you already. I'd better leave it for you to finish all of these first, and once they are done with, I'll put the rest of my comments up (if there are any more, I mean). Bless, and happy editing... Belle tête-à-tête 12:04, 11 August 2010 (UTC)