Talk:International Purple Hijab Day

Hiya and thank you for contributing to the Feminism and Folklore Write-a-Thon and contest. First, I will run this text through my readability gizmo: [1] I'm getting results as low as ninth grade with an average of tenth. I really like to see middle school range.

Because the gizmo is a tool and not my brain, I will now read the article! Please stand by. My brain is powered by human blood and cerebrospinal fluid and their contents. Darkfrog24 (talk) 22:14, 17 February 2024 (UTC)

@Ayesha46: I feel this article has not undergone enough simplification from its en.wiki version. You've placed links around less simple words, but that is not enough. The idea is that a Simple English reader should be able to read the whole article without clicking through to another. Instead, do what you did with "victim": Link to the word but spell out the meaning.

In addition to this, this appears to be a translation from en.wiki and it must be marked as such. There are two ways to do this: 1) Say in the very first change description, "Translated from en.wiki, oldid=[ID from the page history of the version you translated]." 2) Place the translated template on this talk page, as I did on Hadesarchaea: {{translated page|en|Hadesarchaea|version=929503340}}. Darkfrog24 (talk) 22:19, 17 February 2024 (UTC)

I appreciate your thorough check for this, I didn't know about that translate template I used to thought if you translate a page from Translor then only it will show that stuff but I had done it manually.. and I'll try simplifying it more, Thanks for suggestion -- 💌Ayesha46 (talk) 05:08, 18 February 2024 (UTC)