Talk:Jarya
Latest comment: 9 months ago by 2001:2020:315:807E:DD9F:5DBF:7DC8:FB24 in topic Not okay yet, maybe
Not okay yet, maybe change
"had thousands of jawaris as well as concubines who were not always the same ...".--Suggestion: Split up the two ideas, in two sentences/periods.--Good luck, while i am busy trying to improve other articles. 2001:2020:315:807E:DD9F:5DBF:7DC8:FB24 (talk) 17:45, 3 September 2023 (UTC)
- "because they were able to entertain a man with their artistic skills or their knowledge, rather than sexuality and physical beauty".--If these women were a kind of sex slave, then please change the text. (One might now read/understand, something like: These [sex slaves], did not do sexual services.) Good luck, while i am busy trying to improve other articles. 2001:2020:315:807E:DD9F:5DBF:7DC8:FB24 (talk) 17:53, 3 September 2023 (UTC)
- " Al-Jahiz described the 'sexual harem slaves".--Maybe not okay English.--Two ideas? Harem and sexual-slaves? 2001:2020:315:807E:DD9F:5DBF:7DC8:FB24 (talk) 18:04, 3 September 2023 (UTC)