Talk:Nihang

Hello FNF2024 participant! I will begin evaluation by running this article through my readability gizmo:[1] I'm getting results as young as sixth grade with an average of ninth. So far so good.

I will now read it with my mighty human brain. I see several places where the text could be simpler. Why "various"? Why "region"? Why "similarities"? "Golden locks" and "warmly welcomed" may not be clear to a non-native English reader.

This reads more like a regular en.wiki entry (and would make a good one). If you're participating in this contest on en.wiki too, I recommend you translate it over before simplifying it.

This article is a good candidate for further simplification. Darkfrog24 (talk) 00:34, 27 February 2024 (UTC)

I've simplified those words, changed "locks" to "mane", and explained it. Unfortunately, I'm blocked on English Wikipedia and can't participate in FAF there. Hoping to do that next year. – Cyber.Eyes2005^Talk 14:30, 27 February 2024 (UTC)

Been there. Bummer. Good luck with the unblock procedure. It can get brutal. Darkfrog24 (talk) 04:17, 28 February 2024 (UTC)

Thanks :) – Cyber.Eyes2005^Talk 05:07, 28 February 2024 (UTC)