Talk:Primer (movie)
Latest comment: 1 year ago by 68.187.65.176 in topic Informal writing style in opening paragraphs.
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Informal writing style in opening paragraphs. change
The opening paragraphs, particularly the 2nd and the 3rd, are written informally and poorly. If anyone is reading this and can write in a professional, formal language, can they fix this? I don't think I'm the right person for this job, as I am not good enough at this style of writing. 68.187.65.176 (talk) 21:54, 17 August 2022 (UTC)