Talk:Super Smash Bros. (video game)
Latest comment: 15 years ago by The Rambling Man on tour in topic Things to consider before I think it can be a GA
Things to consider before I think it can be a GA change
- Crossover fighting game is red linked. It´s vital to understanding the article what these terms mean so I suggest you create the required pages.
- "It was sold in Japan on January 21, 1999..." sold for just one day? Rephrase.
- Apply that comment to the rest of the "sold in" phrases in the lead.
- "people players" do you mean human players?
- "...games and more!" is this an advert?!
- Introduce the characters before listing them out.
- "8 starters and 4 unlockables." this is unclear, grammatically incorrect, and numbers below 10 should be written as text.
- "you will always fight last" this isn´t an instruction manual, rephrase.
- Rephrase the rest of the sections with that in mind.
- Avoid contractions, e.g. "they´re"... they are.
- I would appreciate more references in the "How it works" section.
- "The making of SSB" expand SSB as you´ve never used it before as an abbreviation.
- "In Japan, 1.97 million Super Smash Bros. CDs were sold, and 2.93 million Super Smash Bros. CDs have been sold in the United States." needs referencing.