Talk:Wall
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Clementina in topic Second Sentence
Wall Invention change
Is there any information on who invented the wall? I feel this is vital for the integrity of the article.
I seem to recall the oldest walled cities being in the Fertile Crescent, but I can't find that for sure anywhere.Swtx1836 (talk) 08:01, 11 July 2010 (UTC)Swtx1836
Second Sentence change
I'm a native English speaker attending university. I can not figure out what the second sentence means by "[A wall]… pictures a space in the open air." Maybe rephrase it to "creates a picture?"Swtx1836 (talk) 08:01, 11 July 2010 (UTC)Swtx1836
- I agree it's very confusing (and probably incorrect). I've removed it for now. :) Thanks for pointing that out. Kindly, —Clementina talk 08:07, 11 July 2010 (UTC)