Talk:Yowlah
Latest comment: 10 months ago by Darkfrog24
 | This article is part of the Feminism and Folklore 2024 edit-a-thon! |
 | This article contains a translation of Yowlah from en.wikipedia. |
| This article contains a translation of يولة from ar.wikipedia. |
Hello and thank you for contributing to the F&F 2024 write-a-thon and contest. I will begin by running this article through my readability gizmo. Some of the formulae rate this text as suitable for readers as young as eighth grade, but I don't like to see anything over eighth grade, and its average is ninth.[1]
I will now run the text through my brain to make sure the gizmo wasn't just being silly. Please stand by... Darkfrog24 (talk) 00:57, 16 February 2024 (UTC)
- I see a couple of places where passive voice could be converted to active "The dance is well known in Qatar" vs "People also perform the dance in Qatar."
- Excellent choice of topic.
- I'm scraping this one by. Darkfrog24 (talk) 01:00, 16 February 2024 (UTC)