Talk:Zahra Rahnavard

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Yahya

@Yahya: Yahya, what a great choice of subject for this contest. There are a few English mistakes that I'd like to see fixed before I give this its marks. For example, there is a missing indefinite article (the word "a") before "activist" and the phrase "in the people who made early revolutions" does not make sense in English. Do you want help? I am online every day. Darkfrog24 (talk) 02:31, 8 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

I would also like to see this a little simpler and a little further from its en.wiki original before approving it for the contest. Outside the contest, however, I have marked it patrolled. Darkfrog24 (talk) 19:31, 8 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Darkfrog24: I somehow missed your message at the right time. Thanks for improving the article. Regards, —Yahya (talkcontribs.) 09:41, 19 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
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