Talk:British Rail Class 117

PGA comments

• The infobox is incomplete.
• British Rail - should be bold, because it's part of the title.

   Fixed Pmlineditor I ♥ Gobby! 08:00, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

• When it was first introduced, these three-car units were all based at the similar Class 121 single carriage (railcar) units on British Railway's Western Region for suburban work out of London Paddington. - very long sentence, therefore too complex.

   Fixed Broken up into two sentences. Pmlineditor I ♥ Gobby! 08:09, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

• It was also based... - The units were largely based... - The units... - poorly written.
• soldiered - not simple.
• liability - not simple.
• branchline curves - not simple.
• Lot'S of redlinks.

   Doing... 12 remain. Pmlineditor I ♥ Gobby! 12:29, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

• Only two refs.

Barras (talk) 19:12, 17 July 2009 (UTC)