Talk:Megadeth
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Lights and freedom in topic Editing for GA
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change"A different bassist was going to make new recordings. Mustaine did not reveal who this bassist was. (...) Steve Di Giorgio, the bassist for Testament, played on The Sick, the Dying... and the Dead!."
I have been thinking about making the connection between these sentences clearer, but have not thought of how it would be written. Any ideas? DovahFRD (talk) 00:28, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
Another thing- is 'fired' a simple term? Don't know a more concise way to put it, but wondering if I'm just not thinking hard enough. 🤘🤘 DovahFRD (talk) 19:55, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
- @DovahFRD Maybe you could just add "Mustaine later said that Steve Di Giorgio, the bassist for Testament, played on The Sick, the Dying... and the Dead!." It explains why that sentence is in that place. "Fired" isn't on the Basic English 850, but it is on the combined list, and I think it can understood by context. Lights and freedom (talk) 04:42, 20 February 2023 (UTC)