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Hi, I see that you have copied pages from English Wikipedia. I have marked them for Quick Deletion as unsimplified copies. Please red Wikipedia:How_to_copy_from_another_Wikipedia before copying from English Wikipedia. Thanks, Gotanda (talk) 23:14, 29 July 2013 (UTC)Reply

Hi Itar buttar. Maybe I should have helped edit instead of tagging for deletion, but I didn't really have time. I used to be more active here, but recently I've been too busy at work. So, one thing I do is patrol the New Pages. The list was getting really long, so I just tagged for deletion. Many people just copy things here and never come back again. But, I see you really want to work on the articles. Thank you.
Let's see if we can improve things. First, I think the articles will be deleted because they are copies. But! Anyone can create them again. I see that you have talked with Auntof6 about moving the articles to your userspace. That is an excellent idea. Auntof6 is a very helpful editor. Gotanda (talk) 04:46, 30 July 2013 (UTC)Reply
I have simplified Boota Singh for you, to give you a better idea of what is needed - shorter sentences, simpler vocabulary, and clearer/more direct syntax. I have also made some edits to Shaheed-e-Mohabbat Boota Singh. Zainab Singh is now located at User:Itar buttar/Zainab Singh, for you to work on a bit further. You can move it back into the mainspace when you think it is ready, and I will check it. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Osiris (talk) 06:58, 30 July 2013 (UTC)Reply
Thanks Osiris. --Itar buttar (talk) 08:06, 30 July 2013 (UTC)Reply