User talk:Mh7kJ/Archives/April 2013
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Latest comment: 11 years ago by Mh7kJ in topic Sentence length
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What's happening here?
Please take a look at User talk:Gambo7#Emblem of the Holy See? --Jinki (talk) 16:00, 1 April 2013 (UTC)
- I don't know how to parse the relevant issues? --Jinki (talk) 16:09, 1 April 2013 (UTC)
- Osiris is probably correct with his response. -Mh7kJ (talk) 16:36, 1 April 2013 (UTC)
Barnstar
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| You do a fine job with everything you do here, so here's a barnstar for you. Lugia2453 (talk) 18:19, 19 April 2013 (UTC) |
- Thanks! :D -Mh7kJ (talk) 19:25, 19 April 2013 (UTC)
Sentence length
Re these changes: what was your thinking when you combined some of the sentences into longer sentences? Don't we consider shorter sentences to be simpler? --Auntof6 (talk) 08:54, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
- Shorter sentences are generally easier to follow, but in this particular case I felt that it was over-simple. I don't see any problems with using one or two connectives in a sentence, and constantly having things like "this is because" and "this means" just sounds awful, in my opinion. -Mh7kJ (talk) 09:05, 21 April 2013 (UTC)