Talk:Glass ceiling
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Elytrian in topic Simplification
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Simplification change
Elytrian Shall I help you in simplification of the article? Even if you wish to do everything alone, I am ok! If that's so, then I will wait until the end of September. Else, I might help you! Haoreima (talk) 17:22, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
- Go ahead! But if you left it alone, I'll do it anyway, which would be preferred. 💠Ely - Talk💠 17:23, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
- @Darkfrog24: Is this simplified enough now? 💠Ely - Talk💠 04:56, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
- The first paragraph is much better--you explain what a metaphor is and everything. My readability gizmos still put the whole article at high school or higher. It needs work still. But this is a very advanced concept and of course it is hard to describe it simply. But it is probably the best choice of concept in the whole Simple branch of the contest. Things like "hierarchical corporation" should be in simple English. "Concept" could probably be idea. Again, as soon as the contest is over I'm going to just jump in and do some work myself because it is important for SEWP to have an article on this. Darkfrog24 (talk) 15:42, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
- @Darkfrog24: Going ahead and fixing it. I was working on the Töregene Khatun article and tried to fix it, it's quite long. Of course, I'm helping other participants out so I don't really mind if it doesn't get completed by October. 💠Ely - Talk💠 15:50, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
- It's on my list for October 1. I don't want to disqualify it because if another judge says "yes, it's simple enough," I don't plan to argue. Darkfrog24 (talk) 22:29, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
- I've gone ahead and done some minor simplification, and explained hierarchal corporation. 💠Ely - Talk💠 04:34, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
- It's on my list for October 1. I don't want to disqualify it because if another judge says "yes, it's simple enough," I don't plan to argue. Darkfrog24 (talk) 22:29, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
- @Darkfrog24: Going ahead and fixing it. I was working on the Töregene Khatun article and tried to fix it, it's quite long. Of course, I'm helping other participants out so I don't really mind if it doesn't get completed by October. 💠Ely - Talk💠 15:50, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
- The first paragraph is much better--you explain what a metaphor is and everything. My readability gizmos still put the whole article at high school or higher. It needs work still. But this is a very advanced concept and of course it is hard to describe it simply. But it is probably the best choice of concept in the whole Simple branch of the contest. Things like "hierarchical corporation" should be in simple English. "Concept" could probably be idea. Again, as soon as the contest is over I'm going to just jump in and do some work myself because it is important for SEWP to have an article on this. Darkfrog24 (talk) 15:42, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
- @Darkfrog24: Is this simplified enough now? 💠Ely - Talk💠 04:56, 26 September 2021 (UTC)