Talk:Helloi

Help me

@Belwine: Will you please help me to simplify the article of this page? There's a notification in the page also. Haoreima (talk) 17:42, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

@Haoreima: Ok, I will try some simplification. To avoid this in future, make sure the words you have chosen are on BE 1500. Thanks, —Belwine • 💬 • 📜 17:43, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

Thank you. Haoreima (talk) 17:44, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

@Haoreima: Hi, I've done some simplification. I will see if I can do some more later when I have more time. Thanks, —Belwine • 💬 • 📜 17:46, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

Sure. Haoreima (talk) 17:53, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

I think this is one of those times when simplifying the page means replacing specific words with many simple words. "Maiden" -> "young woman." "Seducing" -> "using their beauty to trick men into having sex with them," or whatever specific type of seduction the helloi use. Darkfrog24 (talk) 15:01, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Darkfrog24 At first, I was reluctant to frequently use the term "have sex" in children's wiki. Well, I upgraded that one. Besides, please review if there's anymore. What about male submission? Is it simple enough? Haoreima (talk) 15:27, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

I guess you could care less as of Wikipedia:NOTCENSORED :smirk: kolva | chat? 15:28, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Kolva is correct, we're not censored. "Have sex" is fine. However, "seducing" was an example of the kind of way this article is too complex. The whole article needs simplifying. Even without the contest, I can't do it because I don't know exactly what the Helloi are. Darkfrog24 (talk) 15:36, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Darkfrog24 Hellois are exactly like nymphs, sirens, sylphs, etc. Besides, I have added English references. You can learn more about them from there. Haoreima (talk) 16:05, 7 March 2022 (UTC)