Talk:Muse (band)
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Classical Esther in topic PGA comments
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Note to self
changePGA suggestions
changeThese are some of my thoughts after a quick read through. Generally looks good, and the readability figures are good too. I have never heard of the band, so I will have to go and find a few tracks to listen to. Apart from the the few red links that you will need to fix: Intro:
- Genre names like alternative rock - these should not have a capital letter.
- Album links - remove them until you have an article to go with them, or create, dare I say it, a stub.
- Instrument names like guitar, do not need a capital letter
- Have you got a reference for who is in the band?
- Museband.net was about the best I could find. Their official webpage has a "members" section, which I assume has info about the band and its members, but you have to register for access. Lauryn Ashby (d) 21:29, 23 January 2010 (UTC)
Creation:
- The band name, Fixed Penalty, should be in capitals, unless they wrote it as Fixed penalty.
Showbiz:
- Numbers higher than ten usually written as numerals, so eighty becomes 80.
- The term, 21st century, could be linked
Origin:
- Link Japan
- Is Peter Gabriel(e) spelt correctly? He needs an article too!
Fixed and article created - --Peterdownunder (talk) 12:23, 6 February 2010 (UTC)
Absolution:
- Bellamy's guitar - "used on guitar", is that a typo for "one"?
The Resistance:
- Dates, do not need a comma between month and year, so 22 May 2009, is correct while 22 May, 2009, is not. It is in our Wikipedia:Manual of Style.
- I didn't see any instances of this. Lauryn Ashby (d) 21:24, 23 January 2010 (UTC)
- Fixed There were 12! --Peterdownunder (talk) 12:23, 6 February 2010 (UTC)
- This section os very disjointed, each sentence starting the same way. It needs a rewrite.
- Agree, will work on this later. Lauryn Ashby (d) 21:24, 23 January 2010 (UTC)
I'll look at some of the red links this week. Peterdownunder (talk) 11:44, 21 January 2010 (UTC)
- Fixed No more redlinks (except for some in the refs) Peterdownunder (talk) 12:23, 6 February 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I'll get to fixing those and to improving the refs. Pmlineditor ∞ 15:35, 21 January 2010 (UTC)
Other albums
changeShould we include Hullabaloo and HAARP in the discography? --cremepuff222 (talk) 06:37, 23 January 2010 (UTC)
PGA comments
change- Why are the instruments in the lead not linked?
- successful in the US, UK - should be written out and linked.
- Why are there several hidden comments in the prose (weblinks). Use them as a references or whatever you want or remove them.
- was released in June 2001 in the UK. - was the correct order not place before time? Switch UK and date (if I remember correctly).
- injured - is not simple.
Done injured -> hurt —Classical Esther 01:51, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
