Talk:Tara Vanderveer
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Creol in topic Notes
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- She was born in Melrose, Massachusetts. This makes her "People from Massachusetts". the "From California" is iffy but as she is associated with Stanford that leans heavily that way. Ideally she would be in a "sportpeople from .." in these areas and not "People from .."
- Why she is notable is important to include. WHat is she famous for? In this case we are talking about a 10x PAC 10 coach of the year, long time head coach of a NCAA division I team (championship team 3x) and medal winning team head coach (Gold:Olypics, goodwill games, World University games, Bronze: FIBA world championships). Any of these facts are notable but non of them are listed here. It barely glosses over mentioning Stanford in one of several quotes she has made. Stanford head coach is a defining point of who she is and should be in one of the firse 2-3 sentences - 1:name, (date/place of birth), American (womans) basketball coach. 2. Why notable? head coach at Stanford, multiple time coach of the year, former olympic coach. 3: Expand those points. 4 Other information as desired.
- Most all wikipedia article on people tend to follow this pattern. --Creol(talk) 10:23, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
- Commons has images of her (at least 1 (*points above*). Picts are a good thing in moderation