Hamid barani

User:Hamid barani

Hi Hamid barani, Could I move User:Hamid barani to article space please as it looks like you've finished with it?, I didn't want to move it in case you're not finished with it, Many thanks, Kind Regards, –Davey2010^Talk 15:06, 6 November 2024 (UTC)

Hello, dear Mr. Devi, the article I wrote was longer, but it is too short. What do you think? Isn't it better to place art criticism with more sources? Hamid barani (talk) 22:14, 7 November 2024 (UTC)

Hi @Hamid barani, Just a heads up this talkpage will be moved back to your talkpage in due course (when i moved User:Hamid barani I forgot to uncheck the "move associated talkpage" box,

Regarding the content; Phrases such as "is a renowned", "known for his innovative approach", "making him one of the most influential contemporary artists from Afghanistan. He is recognized for his unique approach to integrating visual art and sound, creating a multi-sensory experience that reflects the depth of Afghan culture and history" (etc etc etc)

I'm sure you can understand and appreciate that we're an Encyclopaedia and therefore articles have to remain neutral-toned, Your wording etc made the article read more like an advertisement than an encyclopaedia article which is why I removed the majority of it,

You're more than welcome to edit the page and readd bits I've deleted providing it's neutrally worded, Thanks, –Davey2010^Talk 22:28, 7 November 2024 (UTC)

Hello, move the page, thank you Hamid barani (talk) 11:13, 9 November 2024 (UTC)