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Peterdownunder (talk) 20:45, 22 February 2016 (UTC)

Problem with intro on bursitis

Hi Librarycasti5, thanks for your edits on Bursitis. When you changed the opening sentence, you have ended up with a definition which is trying to define itself. Bursitis is defined as sore bursa, which doesn't make much sense if you do not know what a bursa is. The sentence you changed was much stronger: Bursitis is where a small sac called bursa gets inflamed. The rest of your introduction is great. Writing simply is hard, and takes a lot of time and patience. If you have any questions, you can ask them below, and I will see them.--Peterdownunder (talk) 12:26, 25 February 2016 (UTC)