Talk:Crevalle jack
Latest comment: 9 years ago by September 1988 in topic Notes for this article
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Notes for this article change
complex words: common, marine, distributed, predatory, consume
instead of saying where they "are found", say where they "live"
link these: species
--Auntof6 (talk) 09:47, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
- Reorganized the article, left in only the necessary words. Angela Maureen (talk) 12:10, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
- Pretty good! Still a few complex words. Take care of those. --Auntof6 (talk) 19:58, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
- Got the complexes taken out. Anything more? Angela Maureen (talk) 21:08, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
- Good work! Just the word "marine" still needs addressing. --Auntof6 (talk) 22:05, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
- Word marine was changed. Angela Maureen (talk) 22:35, 6 August 2014 (UTC)