Talk:Hurricane Vince

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UntitledEdit

I have polished the language a bit. Made shorter sentences and such. --Eptalon 20:15, 18 July 2007 (UTC)

To doEdit

  • Create the two redlinks.
Aren't there three redlinks? (Including the one in the references, I mean.) Classical Esther 12:08, 23 March 2010 (UTC)
Those are not counted, it seems. Now, there are two of those. Pmlineditor  15:13, 26 March 2010 (UTC)
  • Fix the accessdates, all refs and extlinks are okay.
    Not done. TRM said it's not needed in another article/
  • Try to simplify a bit more. Pmlineditor  11:04, 22 March 2010 (UTC)
    Basically done. Pmlineditor  12:30, 22 March 2010 (UTC)

VGA reviewEdit

Do the following:

  • If you copied it from en, then why is there 18 refs here and 20 on en? Copy them over.
    The other two are dead links. I'm looking for sources. Pmlineditor  12:34, 22 March 2010 (UTC)
  • All sections could use simplifying. I'll help.
    Yeah, I know. I will look into it tomorrow. It'd be great if you helped. :) Pmlineditor  12:34, 22 March 2010 (UTC)

That is all I can find really. I might find something later though. I-on|I-Гalk |I-PrФjecГ 12:32, 22 March 2010 (UTC)

SimplificationEdit

I overhauled most of the article to make it simpler and more accurate (the first paragraph of the MH was confusing and not correct). I'd appreciate a quick proofread if anybody gets a chance, but it should be getting closer to VGA now. –Juliancolton | Talk 16:05, 26 March 2010 (UTC)

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