Talk:Incarnations of Leimarel Sidabi
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Haoreima
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Here are some things that might need to be simplified, either by switching words or by explaining them:
- supreme
- incarnation (yes, the article says "manifestation," but it doesn't say what that is)
- association
- righteousness
- seduction
- what "industries" means in this specific article
- seasonal
- contemporary
This was actually pretty clean work. Darkfrog24 (talk) 02:06, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
- @Darkfrog24: I have improved it. Now, please have a review! :) Haoreima (talk) 03:02, 18 February 2022 (UTC)