Talk:LGBT pride
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Auntof6 in topic The complex words
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The complex words change
Before I can simplify, I've gotta know how complex this article is, and what are complex words on it. Angela Maureen (talk) 19:15, 26 July 2014 (UTC)
- My comments:
- complex words and phrases:
stance, community (in this context), equality rights,visibilities/visibility,celebrates, diversity Second paragraph, first sentence: split into two sentences -- one about things that are built, and one about what it increases.
- complex words and phrases:
- --Auntof6 (talk) 20:58, 26 July 2014 (UTC)
- I've got certain complex wording taken out. Also, split up second paragraph to two sentences. Angela Maureen (talk) 21:08, 26 July 2014 (UTC)
I've struck out the parts above that were taken care of. Please keep the discussion here and not on my talk page. Thanks. --Auntof6 (talk) 22:09, 28 July 2014 (UTC)
- How could I reword the remainder of the article? Angela Maureen (talk) 00:13, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- First, understand what the complex words mean. Then think about how to say what the sentences mean, but in simpler words. Try thinking about how you would talk to a small child, or someone who was just starting to learn English. If you have trouble with that, maybe you should try a different article. --Auntof6 (talk) 06:24, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- Took out celebrate, diversity, stance and simplified the wording or used alternate words. Should it be simple now? Angela Maureen (talk) 11:35, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
Do you think that Gay pride is simple enough right now for its own page? Angela Maureen (talk) 23:08, 31 July 2014 (UTC)
- There's still a complex word to take care of.
- By the way, when you reply on a talk page, your reply should not be indented the same amount as what you're replying to. You would usually indent one level more. --Auntof6 (talk) 02:56, 1 August 2014 (UTC)
- I took visibility out; anything else complex? Angela Maureen (talk) 10:48, 1 August 2014 (UTC)
- Do you think that Gay pride is simple enough for its mainspace? Angela Maureen (talk) 22:14, 1 August 2014 (UTC)
- It looks OK now. I'll move it back. --Auntof6 (talk) 22:08, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
- Do you think that Gay pride is simple enough for its mainspace? Angela Maureen (talk) 22:14, 1 August 2014 (UTC)